I like this song and try to keep the feeling of a live room vibe as it was recorded in. I could have "cleaned" it a bit, but I left it as rough as it is.
Listening on the headphone I can hear an 808 sounding kick. On the computer speakers it disappears. One way to fix this is to use something like MaxxBass from Waves or other plugin that adds upper harmonics so that the 808 sound can be heard on speakers that can not produce low bass. Just a quick observation and tip.
Thanks for your comment. I was just listening to it at work, on small very computer speakers, and the kick cuts quite well. I guess on headphones they might stand out too much.