19-01-2014, 11:07 AM
If this is your second mix in life, it's very good, keep on working. 
To add on to what Mike Senior said, the snare has gotten to much EQ in the 1kHz - 4kHz area and sounds too harsh. Also there might be a touch too much compression on the bass, I can hear it pumping some times.
To add on to what Mike Senior said, the snare has gotten to much EQ in the 1kHz - 4kHz area and sounds too harsh. Also there might be a touch too much compression on the bass, I can hear it pumping some times.