My first metal mix... (it's bad)

[BramP]

Hey guys, new to the forums here, this is the second song I ever mixed and it's not good So help me get better at it if you got the time. I'm particularly interested in ways to make the drums more powerful, because that is seriously lacking in my version... Do you guys replace the kick for example?

Hoping to hear from you!

[Voon]

Wow, I refreshed the page 5-6 times and the song is still faster than the original, and the pitch is higher also. Did you change the tempo? o.O It' strange. I think that's the main problem. By the way I found for myself that when you got good drums, the song will sound good. I like your guitars, but it's hard to tell you anything more because of the pitch change. I will hear it again this evenening on my monitor speakers, because I'm with some small AKG in-ears right now.
But I think if you fix the tempo, It should sound really good