12-02-2020, 11:29 PM (This post was last modified: 12-02-2020, 11:30 PM by mikej.)
Hi!
Yeah this is quite the challenge I think.
Good job with the intro, and filtering in the loop. I was kind of expecting a big deep reverb kick boom disappearing off into the background at the 21 sec mark though . Nice job with the vocals I think. Really like the background vox at 1:10 and 1:21 too.
It's a real challenge to get the balance right between the vocal/piano/guitar. I think you've given it a fair go though. Yeah, a good effort I feel.
Cheers!
Just uploaded a mix/master? Waiting for comments? Why not give back and critique a mix/master, or two!
Good job with the intro, and filtering in the loop. I was kind of expecting a big deep reverb kick boom disappearing off into the background at the 21 sec mark though . Nice job with the vocals I think. Really like the background vox at 1:10 and 1:21 too.
It's a real challenge to get the balance right between the vocal/piano/guitar. I think you've given it a fair go though. Yeah, a good effort I feel.
I do, however, feel that the mellontron and piano are too pulled back. They disappear in the busier parts of the song. I know it's a difficult area to manouvre in, because so much happens there. Also, maybe I would have set the loop volume a bit lower.
I think that your overall tone is a bit too the bright side, but of course that is a matter of taste.
Nice job
I have a Polish friend, who is a sound engineer. Oh, and a Czech one too.
Thank you for taking time to listen!
Appreciate your inputs! Yeah it does seem too bright. Oh well I guess I will learn to do better next time!
Cheers!
(20-03-2020, 12:18 PM)Krabbe Wrote: Hi
Overall it's not bad, I like the energy.
I do, however, feel that the mellontron and piano are too pulled back. They disappear in the busier parts of the song. I know it's a difficult area to manouvre in, because so much happens there. Also, maybe I would have set the loop volume a bit lower.
I think that your overall tone is a bit too the bright side, but of course that is a matter of taste.