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Candlebox_Surrendering-Yoshi-Mix3
#1
It's my first impression
I need an effort to get used to the plugin

2nd Shul Mixinthecloud Krabbe advice version

3rd RoyM advice Version (24-03-2020, 12:01 AM)

Thank you for listening

--- Yoshi


.mp3    Candlebox_Surrendering-Yoshi-Mix1.mp3 --  (Download: 8.64 MB)


.mp3    Candlebox_Surrendering-Yoshi-Mix2.mp3 --  (Download: 8.63 MB)


.mp3    Candlebox_Surrendering-Yoshi-Mix3.mp3 --  (Download: 8.66 MB)


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#2
Balances are pretty good. Left guitar is louder than the right side.. after a while my right ear wants a lil more there. Vocal is pretty present.. though I'd like it a lil more clear.. sounds muddy at points..
keep it up is sounding pretty good! Smile
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#3
Not bad Yoshi. Vocal is good. The 1st guitar during the verses seems to up front and could be laid back some to give the vocal more presence and keep the mix in balance.
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#4
Hi Yoshi

Nice vocal, it's in your face and I like it.

I do however believe that you could work a little on your gates. In this type of music it's OK if the snare is singing a little bit, but BD and tomps could be more tightly gated.

The guitars in the verse are, as more have described, unbalanced, and the distortied guitars do have a little too much fuzz-esque going on for my liking, at least for this kind of music.

Keep it up, generally it sounds well
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#5
Hi Shul Mixinthecloud Krabbe

I am still studying
I believe we are in the right direction
I need some time

Thank you for listening

--- Yoshi


.mp3    Candlebox_Surrendering-Yoshi-Mix2.mp3 --  (Download: 8.63 MB)


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#6
I only listened to version 2. It sounds good. I think the vocal needs some automation. It's sometimes too quiet and other times too loud. The vocal could also use some reverb to connect it better with the rest of the band. I think there could be more of the distorted guitar 1. The other distorted guitar is a little more present. Other than that it works.
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#7
Hi RoyM

I made some changes
I'm trying to get the atmosphere right now
Once that's done, I'm glad if I can show the individuality of each instrument

Thank you for listening

--- Yoshi


.mp3    Candlebox_Surrendering-Yoshi-Mix3.mp3 --  (Download: 8.66 MB)


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#8
Hey mate, nice mix! I think the ref guitars could come upp in sides though to give it a bit more lift there.
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#9
Hi crownoise

Thanks for the pertinent advice on my guitar treatment!
My PC is in a tight spot with little processing power.
I'm hoping to buy a new PC by summer and do a mixdown I can afford!
I'll be learning more about plugins too!

I'm always referring to your work!
Thank you for listening.

---Yoshi
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