David Tyo: 'Never Ebb But Flow'

[Dangerous]

The Heavier sections sound great Lukas. Very cohesive and full. The verses are on the other hand are sounding a little loose for me. I think the piano part needs to be tucked in a bit more and the vocal taken down a little. As it is, the verse comes on a bit louder than the preceding chorus part, which is upsetting the flow a bit. Otherwise for me this is a real nice first pass. Well done.