This is pretty good. I wish the verse vocal was a little more solid and cleaner to ground the song. I get that you might want to add some interest to the vocal but letting it be more of an anchor would have more of an impact when the rest of the song takes off. I think it might be a little...harsh? Edgy? Still surprisingly easy to listen to loud. But the high end blurs everything a bit. Like a bright day.
Still I like it and I think it embraces what the song wants to do. Good job.