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David Tyo: 'Never Ebb but flow
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I kinda failed on this tbh, but i post it anyway here is first version.

Hi i made another version of this track. I think it got 2 litle bass in it and so on but yea i think it sounds a tiny bit better atleast.


.mp3    Ebb and flow.mp3 --  (Download: 7.68 MB)


.mp3    ebb and flow 2.mp3 --  (Download: 7.68 MB)


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(01-12-2019, 07:52 PM)crownoise Wrote: I kinda failed on this tbh, but i post it anyway here is first version.

Hi Crownoise,

Everything except the lead vocal sounds a bit muffled, like the low end is cut off - did you EQ it like that on purpose? Also, the vocal sounds on the loud side to me, almost separate from the rest of the track. Hope this helps and that you'll perhaps improve it further / share another version?

Cheers!
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Hey Ringoman i made a second version, is it any better Smile?
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Hi Crownoise,

A fairly difficult song to mix, in my opinion. But I like the overal sound/balance of your instruments.
You left out the vocals at 2.20 - 2.30; was this on purpose?
I hear some annoying high sizzling already in the first seconds (0.10-0.12, the piano). Also I hear some very sharp s's throughout the song (could be my hearing aids accentuating some frequencies).
The vocals in the verses sound a little weird. May be too compressed? (for example 'never ever' at 0.33)

Have fun with it! Rob



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