10-11-2019, 08:58 PM
Meh, yeah. I can't say I'd create something better from scratch, obviously, but I do see the weaknesses and I think a quality producer would have taken this basic overall song and broken it down and helped too to create a better song. I feel like we tend to tip toe around it because the subject matter and I get that. But I also feel like because of that it should be more solid and respectful to the subject. It's a hallmark card at this point. Obvious but vapid. I do like the time signature. It evokes a dance between two people. Lyrically though it could be stronger.
Not that David Tyo will ever read this but just in case I mean no disrespect but still stand by it. For such a broad and obvious weighty subject a lazy and passing, 6/10 song will get you some points but over time give it more respect.
It's ok, I'm used to being in the doghouse. I stand by my criticism of this song about a cancer patient's partner's sadness.
Not that David Tyo will ever read this but just in case I mean no disrespect but still stand by it. For such a broad and obvious weighty subject a lazy and passing, 6/10 song will get you some points but over time give it more respect.
It's ok, I'm used to being in the doghouse. I stand by my criticism of this song about a cancer patient's partner's sadness.