Really like the vocal/effect work - especially the "limited bandpass on the double" take on the phrase ends.
Really nice.
If I have any comments, I would say the same vocals could use some resonance taming (subtractive EQ). I'm curious as to your vision for the kick drum. It sounds almost like a dub-kick to me, and that's cool, but it seems to overwhelm other elements of the mix somewhat, forcing for example, the trumpet, etc. to sound less fat and a bit more honky.
Again, all just notes. I really liked the emotion you evoked from the song.