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J.May On the line. My first ever mix, Critique please.
#1
Still really learning to hear so critique on what to focus on next would be great. Smile


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#2
Hi well you have a bit left to learn ;-)
It sound good clear and nice to be the first time mixing it;s good
BUT The bass is fare to high and the overall sound it a bit to much as you se in the tracks you have 2 guitar, mandolin, Cello,
But you don't use them Now the bass take over the show Use the track you have Pan L-R on the guitar delay one 18ms and you get a nice big sounding guitar
Balance all instrument a.
listening in MONO then you hear if some instrument sound bad or not at all

Well a little bit of advice good luck in the future Mixes

Tom.
Mixing in Logic Pro X, normaly only use Logic plug's and Waves L316 on Master track
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#3
(16-10-2013, 11:45 AM)Toveco Wrote: Hi well you have a bit left to learn ;-)
It sound good clear and nice to be the first time mixing it;s good
BUT The bass is fare to high and the overall sound it a bit to much as you se in the tracks you have 2 guitar, mandolin, Cello,
But you don't use them Now the bass take over the show Use the track you have Pan L-R on the guitar delay one 18ms and you get a nice big sounding guitar
Balance all instrument a.
listening in MONO then you hear if some instrument sound bad or not at all

Well a little bit of advice good luck in the future Mixes

Tom.

Thanks for the advice Tom, back to experimenting and reading lots more Smile

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#4
Listening on headphones it doesnt sound bad, maybe a bit compressed for the kind of song but I like the bas and the level is high, but thats somthin I could have done too.
The advice listnin mono is good !
And so is the bas sound. I made a worse job than you there Big Grin
Old ears, old gear, little boy inside love music and sounds and my wife, not necessarily in that order
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