Please Critique my work, thanks

[prince977]

I'm a newby, please tell me what do we think about this mix. Thanks

[Equilibrium]

Newby?? Excellent! My version: http://discussion.cambridge-mt.com/showt...?tid=27394
P.S. Remove noise at the beginning and end of the track. Where did Chorus go at the end of the track?

[Friggy]

Solid balance, but maybe it's lacking some energy and punch to it? I thought the vocals could come up just a little more and could have less effects on them. Specially at the beginning, when the vocals come in, they sound a little to ambient and pushed back from the band.

Cleaning up the front buzz, and the back click track would be a nice touch.

[Mixinthecloud]

Pretty good for a first timer. Good tones throughout. Maybe some minor tweaks with automation would put a brighter shine on this, but it's pretty good. Nicely done.