My Mix for Comments

[Mongo]

I am mustering up the courage to post my mix of a song to the public. Of course, I like it but the real question is how does it appeal to my peers who also mix songs like this. I didn't attempt to do anything fancy or extra i nthe mix/ arrangement. Just strive for a nice smooth blend/balanced mix. I did use my AKG K712 (flat Freq response) headphone due to a lack of near field monitors currently.
Obviously looking for honest feedback.
thx all !

Thanks for taking the plunge, no one here will bite you (that's what my pit bull is for) hehe. Nice balance... nothing stood out on my Presonus Eris E5's ( not the best but adequate) the art of mixing seems to be more subjective to taste, and the quality of gear (does help). Some folks here have full-blown and well tuned studios, others (like me) just mix in an open room with no treatment at all... so no taboo on the cans. Anyway, not really into "techie" critiquing (try as you will you'll never please everyone) sounds good (to me) have FUN mixing...