Care to give this a listen?

[Cranky Emu]

You had me at 6 seconds in Well done.
Not sure what Markster means by 'hole in the middle' if he is referring to placement of elements, think you have it really nicely.

This is not music I would listen to on a daily, or even once yearly basis! To your credit I listened to the whole song, and as much as I hate to say, I liked!