08-11-2018, 10:18 AM
Hey Kirk - Really loving the instrumental sound of your mix. In that respect, I think it beats the preview mix by a good margin, particularly the punch and clarity in your mix's low end.
Where I think it needs some work is in the vocals. There are a number of spots where the vocal drops in level eg: 27 secs, "an angel"; around 34 secs "save me" 40 secs "devil's" 52-53 secs "tonight"; 58 secs-1min (can't make out the words there); 1:06 "feel a.." 1:10-1:12 etc. Overall it seems a little uneven and is getting lost under the music in some spots... Perhaps a little more automation/dynamic control?
Where I think it needs some work is in the vocals. There are a number of spots where the vocal drops in level eg: 27 secs, "an angel"; around 34 secs "save me" 40 secs "devil's" 52-53 secs "tonight"; 58 secs-1min (can't make out the words there); 1:06 "feel a.." 1:10-1:12 etc. Overall it seems a little uneven and is getting lost under the music in some spots... Perhaps a little more automation/dynamic control?
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