Your mix is sooo much clear it's insane. But ! (There always is a "but" :p)
It lacks deepness and power.
It feels like... everything is played on cheap hardware.
Also, I like the way you wanted to add FX and pans on guitar, but pay attention to transitions. Your panned part for example goes Right... then CENTER, then stereo, it's a bit strange.
Otherwise, it's a real good start. It just needs to be waaaaay more fat.
But care, with this may come the tricky part of keeping everything clear.
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(10-07-2018, 02:57 AM)tshanesmothers Wrote: Thank you so much for the critique. I'm just trying to wrap my head around how to fatten the mix. Any suggestions?
(10-07-2018, 02:57 AM)tshanesmothers Wrote: Thank you so much for the critique. I'm just trying to wrap my head around how to fatten the mix. Any suggestions?
You can crank up the bass guitar, then the kick sub, and then maybe add beef to the guitars if it still needs more fatness.