I'm Alright (SNP mix) - comments welcome!

[sergiovalp]

Here is my versión of this cool song. Please tell me what I have to improve.

Thanks!

Sergio
Chile

[Coulomb]

It's a good mix. One thing - try to make it more wide.

[sergiovalp]

It's a good mix. One thing - try to make it more wide.

Done! I put some instruments more wide, and now I hear a big change! Thank you Coulomb! You are the master!

[Nikola Mikovic]

Hi Sergiovalp, nice mix.
It's much better with wider panorama. I like where the back vocals sit in the mix.
One thing thats bothering me is piano and bass that are a bit out of focus.
Try to play with that more.
Cheers

[sergiovalp]

Hi Sergiovalp, nice mix.
It's much better with wider panorama. I like where the back vocals sit in the mix.
One thing thats bothering me is piano and bass that are a bit out of focus.
Try to play with that more.
Cheers

You have the reason! i didn't realize. i was using a side chain to compress bass guitar when kick drum sounds. I reduced that compresión and added subarmonic freq (maxxbass). I was using the piano just like a backing sound, but after read your advice, i tryed to enhance the best parts of the piano. what do u think now? Thank you Nikola!

[Dangerous]

This mix does sound nice Sergio. Well done.

There is a resonate sounding tom or conga in the right ear (headphone listening) that is a bit distracting. Seems to be clouding the bass frequencies a little also when it is sounded. Otherwise an enjoyable listen. Well done.

[Nikola Mikovic]

V3 is much better, a big step forward, great job.

[sergiovalp]

Hi guys, thanks for your comments, you have a super developed ear! really. This is my final version, a little more clean, without the resonance of the conga and background noises. I redoubled the chorus a little too. Please recommend another song on the site to mix it. thank you for your advices Nikola, Dave, Coulomb!

[Nikola Mikovic]

Hey sergiovalp, check out my list of mixes.
All the songs I've done so far are very good for practice. They dont have many tracks.

[m_tree]

Basically a good mix, but:
- the melody instruments are too quiet (ecxept the solo)
- a bit muddy in overall
- too dry for my taste

My mix for comparison:
http://discussion.cambridge-mt.com/showt...?tid=24142