G'day Gamma,
I like your work here. The mix translates well at my end and also plays well through the laptop speakers which is always important. I think your processing has been tastefully applied. For a suggestion moving forward, I think you could move the guitar parts out to the sides leaving the vox and bass up the middle. I think the electric rhythm parts would play off nicely against the acoustic guitar, or is it a mandolin not sure? I don't think you'll need to pan overly wide with this, just enough to open up the mix and clear room for the vox. If you listen carefully you'll hear that the electric guitar part becomes a little buried at times sitting behind the vox. So these panning moves should give it it's own space.
An enjoyable listen. Well Done.
Dave
I like your work here. The mix translates well at my end and also plays well through the laptop speakers which is always important. I think your processing has been tastefully applied. For a suggestion moving forward, I think you could move the guitar parts out to the sides leaving the vox and bass up the middle. I think the electric rhythm parts would play off nicely against the acoustic guitar, or is it a mandolin not sure? I don't think you'll need to pan overly wide with this, just enough to open up the mix and clear room for the vox. If you listen carefully you'll hear that the electric guitar part becomes a little buried at times sitting behind the vox. So these panning moves should give it it's own space.
An enjoyable listen. Well Done.
Dave