On the Line - arrangement changes and mix

[Quetz]

Very creative ideas here. And this mix sounds much better to me than the first one you posed.

I really like what you did with the breakdown after the instrumental verse and also the outro. I like the spirit of the intro, but it seems a bit long and might be more effective if you axed bars 5-8 and 13-16.

Cool stuff!

Hi James!

Thank you so much for commenting
I apologise for such a delayed response, I had no idea you'd posted!
I agree that the intro could be more concise.
I've just been revisiting this song as it's a great learning tool - it's also a great song, which helps
Here's a newer version of the mix, after having had some advice and guidance from a pro - it's getting closer to where I want it

Hope you enjoy this one too.

Thanks James,

Quetz