Hi ! This is my fairly mediocre mix. To remove a rustle I removed many frequencies that made the sound of the snare very weird. The kick is covered by its own low frequences when there are fast shots. I was not able to correct these defects enough (I did not even waste too much time), but for the rest I wanted to know if it's a result near to decency or indecency. Thanks for any feedback! (sorry for my bad english)
You could try replace those kick and snares with some samples to get a better result - I replaced them straight away because they are near unuseable. I think they were recorded with intention of replacing them later,
Really good job on the vocals - the harmonies sit really nicely.
The stand out for me is that I think it's maybe too much compression on the cymbals? Sounds like a wall of washyness in the chorus - maybe there's too much compression sitting on the cymbal and OH's. I personally don't put compression on either of those channels.
Other than that though. Nice mix dude. I like your idea for the intro too.