01-03-2018, 08:48 AM
Dave!
I hope all has been well!
I like your tones, but I think your vox are a little too up front in general (speaking about mix 3). I think a bit of ambience, and bringing them down a bit in the mix might be in order.
I think your bass could be brought up? I'm having a hard time hearing the tone of the bass. I feel it during the choruses, but it's hard to pick out.
Also, maybe a bit of ambience on the whole track could help a little bit with glue? It seems a little bit sterile. I think addressing the bass will help that a lot, though.
Again, overall your tones are quite nice! You have the cymbals sounding quite pleasing! It took a bit of work on my end to get them where I wanted them.
You have a really strong base for your mix, so a few tweaks, and I think it will be super powerful!
Draper
I hope all has been well!
I like your tones, but I think your vox are a little too up front in general (speaking about mix 3). I think a bit of ambience, and bringing them down a bit in the mix might be in order.
I think your bass could be brought up? I'm having a hard time hearing the tone of the bass. I feel it during the choruses, but it's hard to pick out.
Also, maybe a bit of ambience on the whole track could help a little bit with glue? It seems a little bit sterile. I think addressing the bass will help that a lot, though.
Again, overall your tones are quite nice! You have the cymbals sounding quite pleasing! It took a bit of work on my end to get them where I wanted them.
You have a really strong base for your mix, so a few tweaks, and I think it will be super powerful!
Draper