Decided to do try and mix this track in 1 hour, because why not 
Didn't listen to any reference mixes before hand, but listening to others now it seems i've been a bit round handed with the compression and bass, but hey, I had to move fast
If I had to finish this, I would:
Make more elements stereo, including experimenting with the vocal
Trying to nail those darn distorted guitars
Automation, so the vocal doesn't get drowned in the busy parts, and stand out too much in the slow parts (as it does right now)
Didn't listen to any reference mixes before hand, but listening to others now it seems i've been a bit round handed with the compression and bass, but hey, I had to move fast
If I had to finish this, I would:
Make more elements stereo, including experimenting with the vocal
Trying to nail those darn distorted guitars
Automation, so the vocal doesn't get drowned in the busy parts, and stand out too much in the slow parts (as it does right now)