11-02-2018, 05:12 AM
When the body layer of the snare sound comes in, I think the beat actually sounds quite coherent. You might want to focus more on readjusting the levels, maybe take the main beat down a little? The overall sound also feels slightly too bright occationally, you might want to take down the highs from master. Still, the overall result sounds good. You could also go all the way and reproduce the whole song with full blown Manson-sound with all the industrialities etc. ^_^