Perpetual Escape: 'Stop And Rise'

[thedon]

Commenting on V3

That build up into the first verse! Bravo on that!

Your tones sound fantastic in general!

Maybe the cymbals are a bit bright. I used the creative use of the mute button on the acoustic solo. It didn't seem to move the song forward to me, but I understand keeping it as it was part of the artists' vision.

I think that possibly your choruses feel a little too dense? Or maybe it is having a small identity crisis? I think the balance between the distorted guitars and the acoustic might want to be looked at. . .and it could go in either direction. Either add more distortion and bring up the chunk parts, or thin it out a bit on the first chorus in terms of distortion, then introduce more as the song progresses? I dunno, it's just what I hear if I was approaching the mix how I think that you are.

Well done as always, and of course, my thoughts are always subjective!

Draper

Thanks for having a listen Draper I agree with your feedback ,I Will sort out the things you mentioned out in version 4 coming soon !

Cheers