Commenting on V3
That build up into the first verse! Bravo on that!
Your tones sound fantastic in general!
Maybe the cymbals are a bit bright. I used the creative use of the mute button on the acoustic solo. It didn't seem to move the song forward to me, but I understand keeping it as it was part of the artists' vision.
I think that possibly your choruses feel a little too dense? Or maybe it is having a small identity crisis? I think the balance between the distorted guitars and the acoustic might want to be looked at. . .and it could go in either direction. Either add more distortion and bring up the chunk parts, or thin it out a bit on the first chorus in terms of distortion, then introduce more as the song progresses? I dunno, it's just what I hear if I was approaching the mix how I think that you are.
Well done as always, and of course, my thoughts are always subjective!
Draper
That build up into the first verse! Bravo on that!
Your tones sound fantastic in general!
Maybe the cymbals are a bit bright. I used the creative use of the mute button on the acoustic solo. It didn't seem to move the song forward to me, but I understand keeping it as it was part of the artists' vision.
I think that possibly your choruses feel a little too dense? Or maybe it is having a small identity crisis? I think the balance between the distorted guitars and the acoustic might want to be looked at. . .and it could go in either direction. Either add more distortion and bring up the chunk parts, or thin it out a bit on the first chorus in terms of distortion, then introduce more as the song progresses? I dunno, it's just what I hear if I was approaching the mix how I think that you are.
Well done as always, and of course, my thoughts are always subjective!
Draper