17-09-2017, 11:31 AM
Hi Lethan - This is a really challenging song to mix, but I think you've done a pretty decent job, especially considering the difficulties inherent in the tracking.
I think the guitars are a little too bright and harsh at times, especially in the verses. I think if you darkened them up a little in the top end, when the choruses hit with the brighter and more distorted fuzz guitars, it would allow for more contrast. The cymbals do get a little overpowering toward the end, too.
I'm not keen on the doubled vocal in the verse - that sounds a little sour to my ear.
One thing I would suggest is taking another look at the drum pattern in the outro. The drummer is actually playing a "marching band" pattern on the snare drum that is a really key part of this section. It sounds like you might have gated the snare and missed that stuff altogether.
Good work overall!
I think the guitars are a little too bright and harsh at times, especially in the verses. I think if you darkened them up a little in the top end, when the choruses hit with the brighter and more distorted fuzz guitars, it would allow for more contrast. The cymbals do get a little overpowering toward the end, too.
I'm not keen on the doubled vocal in the verse - that sounds a little sour to my ear.
One thing I would suggest is taking another look at the drum pattern in the outro. The drummer is actually playing a "marching band" pattern on the snare drum that is a really key part of this section. It sounds like you might have gated the snare and missed that stuff altogether.
Good work overall!
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