The Doppler Shift: 'Atrophy' (feedback plz)

[LukasL]

Hey Guys,

this is my new mix I hope you can give me a lot of valuable feedback.

Lukas

V2: Did what Dave said.

[Dangerous]

Sounds really good to my ears. With headphones on the mix sounds very solid and glued.
Just wondering if the vocals through the verses are a little loud, especially in the opening passage. I think dropping them back will help the build into the choruses. Also, can you get any extra width with the guitars in the choruses? The mix seems to narrows a little through these sections, lessening the impact the chorus has. I guess the width of the guitar parts in the verses makes this somewhat harder. Your thoughts?

Great Work.

Dave

[LukasL]

Thanks for the reply Dave.
Check out version 2, tried a few things to do what you suggested.

Lukas

[AbsoluteBeginner]

Sound good and thick.
Everything cuts through nicely.
Vocals are a bit dry for my taste.
And the sudden guitar entering the second verse needs to be louder.
Please chime in to my mix if you don't mind.

[LukasL]

Sound good and thick.
Everything cuts through nicely.
Vocals are a bit dry for my taste.
And the sudden guitar entering the second verse needs to be louder.
Please chime in to my mix if you don't mind.

Thanks agree on the vocal and the guitar
And yes I will.