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Another song from Perpetual Escape
#1
Here is another song I mixed.


.mp3    pe dam mp3.mp3 --  (Download: 5.2 MB)


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#2
Version 2 with louder vocals. A little more bass or a little less guitars ?
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#3
Version 2. More vocals.


.mp3    pe dam 2 mp3.mp3 --  (Download: 5.2 MB)


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#4
(27-06-2017, 05:30 PM)Obelix Wrote: Version 2. More vocals.

You're missing some elements that help fill out the song here.

The tracks:
KD and SN has two tracks. Make one the Low end and One the Top end.

The Drum loops and Synths play an integral role in the verse, so make it present but not overbearing.

Control that Bass guitar and give it some top end for definition and clarity.

Good Luck.
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#5
Ok, more definition and clarity on bass and more synths in verses.
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#6
Mix 3


.mp3    dam 3.mp3 --  (Download: 5.2 MB)


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#7
Cool version I like your ideas a lot , maybe taming some boxyness between 400 and 1 k and especially 700 hz in the room and overheads.
Maybe taming the distortion effect at around 0.43 as sounds just a touch upfront.

Nice work Big Grin

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#8
Hey man !

I'm listening to the last version.
The overall distortion you put on the first verse is a good idea, but maybe a bit too obvious. It takes away the punch of the electronic loops which have great kicks.
The toms have no impact at all and sound very distant from the rest of the drum kit.

The kick and the bass works well together, and you placed the guitars upfront, which is good for this song. However the vocals sound behind the guitars while they should be upfront (without being louder).

So you're on the good way Smile A ew things here and there and you'll achieve a very nice mix !
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#9
Version 4. While all sounds good, I dont know what went wrong with bass. I cannot hear it when guitars come, but without guitars it feels fine.


.mp3    pe dam 4 mp3.mp3 --  (Download: 5.18 MB)


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#10
Great job man!
I really like the drums and you managed to get a good guitar tone as well despite the mess of guitar tracks you usually get with their songs Smile
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