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Outer
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Here is my first attempt at this song. Let me know what you guys think.


Frank


.mp3    Outer2m.mp3 --  (Download: 5.28 MB)


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overall, a pretty well balanced mix. I like your vocals and its interesting to hear a such a bass driven interpretation. Nice guitars too.

My main observation is that the snare needs to be more present, but not just the 200hz thwack , it needs the upper mid range smack too (5-10khz).

cheers, Simon
Be fierce in your encouragement, kind in your criticism and try and remember that the art of a good critique is not to make someone else's mix sound like yours...but to help the mixer realize their own vision.

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(05-06-2017, 02:56 AM)HbGuitar Wrote: overall, a pretty well balanced mix. I like your vocals and its interesting to hear a such a bass driven interpretation. Nice guitars too.

My main observation is that the snare needs to be more present, but not just the 200hz thwack , it needs the upper mid range smack too (5-10khz).

cheers, Simon

Thank you for your kind words, I was trying to fill and clear up the mix and I guess my ears hear the bass a bit stranger than most. I did fight with the concept of having more snare but I did bring it back in the end.


Regards, Frank
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