DutyAndMemories (pmilani)

[pmilani]

Hello,
this one seemed challenging.
The verse with synths and female vocals gave me a very ethereal idea, and by contrast wanted to make rawer the part where male vocals come in.
Hopefully done a decent job, not quite sure about the general feel, would have needed to know the band better.

[Mandubien]

Hey ! I'm Perpetual Escape's drummer and mix engineer,

The first thing I've noticed is the kick which is totally buried and masked by the bass. Even the electronic kick does not cut through the mix. I would suggest you to filter the other tracks with a hi pass filter to give some room to the kick. You can even use subtractive EQ to make kick and bass work together.
The bass probably has too much distortion and lacks clarity. I mostly hear only a huge "bzzzrrrrzrzr" :p

You're on the good way ;- Keep it up !