Jet B Suit You-Yoshi-Mix

[Dangerous]

Hi Yoshi,

I feel there is too much clipping of sorts also. I would really love a version of this mix tamed back a bit. I believe there are some good qualities underneath. What do you think?

Dave

[Roy]

I agree that overall it's a bit distorted and limited. My biggest issue is the lead vocal. It feels a little thin and dry. It's such a big, rock song that the vocals have to match that intensity.

[Yoshi Nishikawa]

Hi Dave

Thanks for your comment.
I started studying from last October due to the necessity of DAW.
DAW is a beginner level.
This year, I discovered the existence of Cambridge music technology.
Currently, it is the period of learning I am not making a completed figure
The content of current learning is to learn the characteristics of EQ at high volume
I think that it is effective for making vocals and musical instruments that can listen firmly. I Think I Think .......
I think it is easy to lower the volume
Distortion is lost by lowering the volume or compressing it
This attempt is entering the final stage
I think that I will make works with correct volume
Thereafter, compression, reverb delay, etc.,

Always thank you for your impressions and advice
Thank you very much

Yoshi

[Yoshi Nishikawa]

Hi Roy

Always, Thanks for the advice
I usually listen to jazz, pop, country, classical, R & B and mix
Hard rock and metal have no opportunity to listen
So, the sound image of hard rock and metal is not in my brain
For study, I did mix of Suit You, Hammer Down
I am learning from the opinions of Cambridge Music Technology members
And I am very grateful to you
In the near future, I will make a final mixmastering, ver of this song
I will inform you when I post a work

Thank you very much

Yoshi

[Yoshi Nishikawa]

Hi Roy

Based on Roy's advice I made it
I am glad if I could fix even a bit
It seems that distortion still remains
I understand the solution

[Yoshi Nishikawa]

Hi Dave

I made tr3
I reduced distortion
There is still a little distortion
I understand the distortion tolerance of each department
Later, I will make it possible to produce works with an appropriate level balance

Thank you very much

Yoshi

[Mixinthecloud]

Mix 3 in your brain! LOL.

I like it. All but the lead vox, which is too dry, IMHO. Other than that everything is good. Some interesting approaches which are cool.

[Yoshi Nishikawa]

Hi Mixinthecloud

Thanks for your feedback and advice
I improved the drying of vox
Still, my skills have not come to the stages of delay or reverb
However, I made it only by feeling

Thank you very much

Yoshi