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20-04-2017, 06:20 PM (This post was last modified: 22-04-2017 08:44 PM by Yoshi Nishikawa.)
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It was difficult to make vocal tone
My image freely like a butterfly
I am happy if I could express it

3'23" distortion

1tr The first

2tr Olli H Advice version

Thank you for listening

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22-04-2017, 02:44 PM
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RE: ElizaJane-Yoshi
Sounds nice and smooth to me. Good work with vox.

I was listening with headphones. I think the low mids feel a bit restless. Probably caused by guitars in sides. Maybe you could tame a little low mids in side guitars.

That guitar fix alone might also help to make the bass more defined in center.

At the same time center of the band is maybe too weak. A small boost with snare might cure the center problem. But notice that now the snare is moving slightly in sound stage. Most of the time it’s somewhere near the center but for example a single hits here and there (0.27, 0:37, 0:45, 0:57 etc) are strongly on the right side.

WIth small fixes you'll get a very nice mix out of this.
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22-04-2017, 07:50 PM
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RE: ElizaJane-Yoshi
Hi Olli

Thank you for the advice
I examined all the tracks
I understood the cause
I decided the sound tone in the center
I panned after.
Mid low and low increase, the sound collapses
As a solution, I did the opposite method
The center is lonely, I placed drums in the center
And, it was a little up the volume of Sn

I am happy if I can solve it
Thank you for helping me

I appreciate it.
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