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James May 'Eliza Jane'
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(11-04-2017, 05:28 AM)HbGuitar Wrote: Only listened to V2 so cant offer any progressive analysis

Very solid job with the backing track (drums, bass, guitars etc). Love some of the mandolin runs....sounds like you've automated them nicely....

I feel the vox could come up in level after the middle 8 for the final vamp......those lovely mandolins tickle the ears in ways that leaves them a little fatigued after the solo ....Verse/chorus 1 & 2 sound well balanced.....that closing vamp gets a bit busy making the vox seem a little buried i think.

Cheers, Simon

Right you are Simon. I tend to get over excited with all the sonic candy, that I try to high light it all. Cutting back would keep us eager for more rather than introducing fatigue as you suggest.
I also agree, with the vocal, it could come up a dB or 2 after the bridge section as the song intensifies.
Thanks for the helpful pointers.Smile
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James May 'Eliza Jane' - by Dangerous - 09-04-2017, 12:27 PM
RE: James May 'Eliza Jane' - by Roy - 09-04-2017, 01:31 PM
RE: James May 'Eliza Jane' - by Dangerous - 10-04-2017, 12:48 PM
RE: James May 'Eliza Jane' - by Damian Oakes - 09-04-2017, 08:49 PM
RE: James May 'Eliza Jane' - by Dangerous - 10-04-2017, 12:52 PM
RE: James May 'Eliza Jane' - by Olli H - 10-04-2017, 01:26 PM
RE: James May 'Eliza Jane' - by Dangerous - 12-04-2017, 12:28 PM
RE: James May 'Eliza Jane' - by HbGuitar - 11-04-2017, 05:28 AM
RE: James May 'Eliza Jane' - by Dangerous - 12-04-2017, 12:39 PM
RE: James May 'Eliza Jane' - by Max Headroom - 12-04-2017, 03:40 PM
RE: James May 'Eliza Jane' - by thedon - 13-04-2017, 10:44 AM
RE: James May 'Eliza Jane' - by Dangerous - 17-04-2017, 12:54 PM
RE: James May 'Eliza Jane' - by Dangerous - 17-04-2017, 12:47 PM
RE: James May 'Eliza Jane' - by Mixinthecloud - 21-06-2017, 07:13 PM
RE: James May 'Eliza Jane' - by Mixinthecloud - 21-06-2017, 07:20 PM
RE: James May 'Eliza Jane' - by Dangerous - 22-06-2017, 12:15 PM
RE: James May 'Eliza Jane' - by Mixinthecloud - 22-06-2017, 12:40 PM