My attempt

[Moproq]

Mixed using Beyerdynamic DT250 and Waves NX.

[haitiabsolut]

I think this is a good mix. The only problems I heard on my end is the lead vocal seems slightly louder than the instrumentation.
You definitely brought up the snares, kick, and bass line. I think panning the drums a bit would've a bit more space to them. Right
now, the drums sound very solidified like you kept all the drum parts centered.

[TiPa]

Once again the snare is brutal ! I know this is a challenge in this mix, there too much of it on the OH. I like the vocals treatment but I agree it's too loud. The guitars are good. The bass is maybe a bit shy.