Tell me what you think!

[Roy]

This sounds pretty good. My only thought is that it feels a bit aggressive and "in your face". I think it be a little more subtle and dynamic. Everything sounds good and balanced but it feels like an advert rather than a cool video if that analogy makes any sense. A summer blockbuster, like a Transformers movie.

Now I say all that because it does sound good. I can't find an element that I really have a problem with. I can't say my version is any better.

I hope that helps but I know that's probably not that helpful.

Cheers.