I think the second rythm guitar is a little bit hide in the mix. The main guitar is too centered. Panning it could give more space for the second guitar.
Very good balance on drum and bass guitar.
Nice movement putting the back vocals upfront in the second part of the song.
Very nice overall mix!
Best regards!
Great bass and drums. Agree with comments about EG2. It feels a bit buried in the mix so seems out of balance with EG1. Good Job. Cheers, Simon
Be fierce in your encouragement, kind in your criticism and try and remember that the art of a good critique is not to make someone else's mix sound like yours...but to help the mixer realize their own vision.