Fingernails for Breakfast

[axe45]

Hi guys, new genre for me so let me if totally misread the song.

[Judders]

I think what your mix lacks is focus. The vocals are lost in a wash of reverb and the drums lack impact, the bass is getting a bit muddy too.

It is all too balanced, so nothing in particular grabs the listener's attention.

I do like that you dealt with breath noise in the vocal, and also that you balanced the lead vox with the BV's so that the lyrics worked well when they were doing call and response, but they were just all a bit too far back.