Believe try

[jamalale]

Just a try.... Hoping for a constructive feedback

[SonicTramp]

I like your mix. Raw and in your face kinda mix. I wish I didn't have to put up with all the esses tho. Very judicial use of reverb. Awesome!
You can check mine out to see that I took another approach. I mixed mine with a little more relax and laid back feel. Who knows, you might enjoy it . Thx