anglish actor, my attemp.

[waswise]

still dont know how to clean the vocal.. but i guess the chrous sounds okay..

[Dangerous]

Nice punchy Mix. Maybe some extra stereo width? Just sounding a bit up the middle listening with headphones. Quite nice otherwise. Well Done.
Dave

[waswise]

Nice punchy Mix. Maybe some extra stereo width? Just sounding a bit up the middle listening with headphones. Quite nice otherwise. Well Done.
Dave

Yes you are right.. thank you for the advise..

[Mandubien]

Hi !

You should compress more the vocals, they still have a lot of dynamics.
Drums are very soft during choruses, so they're not punchy at all. You should spend more time adjusting volumes, or use automation.

Keep it up

[waswise]

Thx for the advise Man

yes needs to tame the dynamic with the vocal. Hopefully it will lessen the harshness too.

+1 for the automation.
Automation is the part when I still dont have the confident to do it. I have not grasp how to do the it within DAW

Regards

Hi !

You should compress more the vocals, they still have a lot of dynamics.
Drums are very soft during choruses, so they're not punchy at all. You should spend more time adjusting volumes, or use automation.

Keep it up

[Konek]

Hello! Join all of the above, but it's just a practice.
i liked your work with choruses, it sounds really strongly.
Well done