Better way

[DanielHwang]

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[j_ohnny]

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Nice Mix Daniel. The only thing that jumps out at me is the bad bass note at 30 seconds in and maybe the overall sibilance of the vocal. I took your advice about the bass level on my version but I may have pushed it too far. That is definitely the area I have the most trouble getting right....or close to right.

Tim

[JunglestateUnion]

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Hello !, Here's what I think: I think the vocal little steps forward, especially felt in the first loss of the shaker. Try to make automation on the vocal part to add more shrinkage vocals in the mix.
Second, do instrumentam- priority to determine which instruments play the main and side part. Now this is not quite true done.
Third: Mix should be read as a whole, in this version it is not enough: acoustics guitar without reverb (or almost no), thereby develops discrepancy reverb.More reverb use the processing for each tracks.
Fourth: Solo acoustic guitar should stand up for the balance of the vocal level.
 
Good luck!

[Konek]

Hi Daniel! That's pretty fine!
I lost slide guitar in your mix