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03-07-2016, 02:47 AM
(This post was last modified: 08-07-2016, 03:44 AM by djaypee .)
Nice song! Here's my edited version!
I noticed some parts of the song where the band was not in complete control of their stuff and I dismissed that. Sorry... ;-)
Feel free to comment!
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08-07-2016, 03:48 AM
(This post was last modified: 08-07-2016, 03:51 AM by djaypee .)
Here's an updated version with the drums a bit more upfront and I had a bit more fun with the structure and the playing.
Thanks for listening!
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I think the vocals are too upfront. That being said for punk pretty much anything goes and anything works lmao. Other than that I would say maybe bring the bass drum up a little bit? extra points for creativity while rearranging structure.