My try at mixing this song. Had a Blast :D

[Plucio]

Tell me what you think

[wesleyamltd]

Tell me what you think

First of all the guitars sound decent.

I noticed the following things while listening to your mix.

The mix is good start and I want you to know that I am not trying to say I'm better than you in any way by my critiques.

The mix is somewhat balanced as far as levels are concerned.

The reverb is excessive, perhaps try a highpass on the reverb effect itself (most have the option)to remove unwanted shimmer, it will sound more natural.

The cymbals are too high in the mix and they're distorted from high freq build up. Try attenuating somewhere between 6K and 10k this will help make space for the vocals also.

You can also try using a mutiband compressor to even out the OH

The compression that's on the overall mix is round and that means you stomping on the initial transients. Try a medium attack and a low ratio like 1.5 or 2.1 with a longer release.

Good luck on future mixes.

Cheers

Feel free to critique my mix as well.