Sleep By The Fire, Bloom In Water

[BullC]

Hi everyone, any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Personally I think the snare needs a fair bit of work in this mix, what do you think?

[BullC]

If anyone is interested also have a listen to this attempt which I abandoned not long into the mixing process for obvious reasons. I have no idea how I managed to butcher it this badly but I will say this is what happens when you get lazy, take shortcuts and don't pay enough attention to the basics. P.S. It's also a lot louder so turn your speaker down