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Slow Down - Please criticize
Saevarl Offline
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10-02-2016, 04:45 PM (This post was last modified: 11-02-2016, 03:50 PM by Saevarl.)
I am totally new to this and I would appreciate if you would listen and let me know what could be better.

Thanks


.mp3    Slow Down-Jessica Childress Remix .mp3 --  (Download: 6.01 MB)


.mp3    Slow Down - Jessica Childress - Remix 3.mp3 --  (Download: 5.92 MB)


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11-02-2016, 09:22 AM
Hi
Welcome ,
I Like your mix ,Being really critical I think making the kick tighter by removing low frequencies from any reverb on the kick or using a gate to tame any loose bottom end and maybe notching out a some ringing around the 130hz area would give more room for the other instruments.One other minor thing is the panned Electric guitar is jumping just out a touch ?
Just a couple of things that i think that can improve your mix while having a quick listen.
Good Job !
Cheers Big Grin

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11-02-2016, 03:56 PM
(11-02-2016, 09:22 AM)thedon Wrote: Hi
Welcome ,
I Like your mix ,Being really critical I think making the kick tighter by removing low frequencies from any reverb on the kick or using a gate to tame any loose bottom end and maybe notching out a some ringing around the 130hz area would give more room for the other instruments.One other minor thing is the panned Electric guitar is jumping just out a touch ?
Just a couple of things that i think that can improve your mix while having a quick listen.
Good Job !
Cheers Big Grin


Thank you for your advice. I´ve uploaded another version in which i think the drums are a bit cleaner and tighter and the guitar more tamed. I´m using headphones though and can´t wait to get monitors.
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