A new version of this cool song!

[Creyicd]

i trying to blance the all sounds. but ,it still can't be what i want.
hope for your advice~

[Valladares]

Hi!

There are two things i think would improve your mix a lot. First, you could EQ the snare with a parametric to reduce some middle-low freq that keep "buzzing" (sorry about my English, i don't know how to detail this). Second, you've heavily compressed the lead vocal and rapper, i can even hear the background noise captured by the singer's mic on quiet passages, as well as the breathing. I think you could try to decrease some compressor's settings or even turn it off, handling the vocals "on the fly"...

Except for these, it's a good sounding mix.

[Creyicd]

Hi!

There are two things i think would improve your mix a lot. First, you could EQ the snare with a parametric to reduce some middle-low freq that keep "buzzing" (sorry about my English, i don't know how to detail this). Second, you've heavily compressed the lead vocal and rapper, i can even hear the background noise captured by the singer's mic on quiet passages, as well as the breathing. I think you could try to decrease some compressor's settings or even turn it off, handling the vocals "on the fly"...

Except for these, it's a good sounding mix.

this is my fixed version