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Bobby Nobody - Stitch Up by JK
06-05-2015, 02:28 AM (This post was last modified: 06-05-2015 02:29 AM by Vorocity.)
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Bobby Nobody - Stitch Up by JK
I've been mixing heavy metal for the last couple years and thought I should venture out abit so this is my first true attempt to try another genre. Does it sound level? Is there anything I should change up/suggestions? I'm trying to up my game as an engineer and venture outside my comfort zone. All criticism is welcome! This only took me about an hour or 2.

-James


.mp3   bobbynobodyv1.mp3 --  (Download: 8.17 MB)


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07-05-2015, 02:04 AM
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RE: Bobby Nobody - Stitch Up by JK
I could do with a little more verb on the vox. Not a lot, but they seem just a tad dry at points. The jangly guitar just before the recapitulation before the second verse could be a little fatiguing, maybe lower some of the highs just a bit on it? Otherwise, I dig it man. Nice work.

Draper
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08-05-2015, 01:07 PM
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RE: Bobby Nobody - Stitch Up by JK
(07-05-2015 02:04 AM)loweche6 Wrote:  I could do with a little more verb on the vox. Not a lot, but they seem just a tad dry at points. The jangly guitar just before the recapitulation before the second verse could be a little fatiguing, maybe lower some of the highs just a bit on it? Otherwise, I dig it man. Nice work.

Draper

Solid input! Thank you! I was debating about widening out the main vocal line a little also to help with that dryness, I feel like too much verb can often make it sound odd to my ear and I always tend to overdue it on accident so I'm a little hesitant with its use. And I'm dialing back that jangly guitar part, just noticed it was a little loud after reading this. =)

-James
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09-05-2015, 05:04 AM
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RE: Bobby Nobody - Stitch Up by JK
Here's a new version tweaked abit with said changes.


.mp3   bobbynobodyv3.mp3 --  (Download: 8.17 MB)


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09-05-2015, 09:41 PM
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RE: Bobby Nobody - Stitch Up by JK
I like the mix, however, I think the drums could sound a little more powerful. Try supporting the kick and snare with some samples. Also, The vocal could be louder in the 'turn around, hit the ground' section.
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31-05-2015, 09:50 AM
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RE: Bobby Nobody - Stitch Up by JK
Hi vorocity I agree with Niko about the drums, mind you saying that some might say that my drums are too big, I think the guitar in my left can is a bit distracting, still you have a nice sound, thanks.
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