My mix

[Jack]

Here's a mix following your advice to the best of my knowledge. Brought up the second kick and boosted eq around 800hz. Eq'd snare a bit around 300hz. Copied guitar, mixed straight sound with flanged and eq'd around 1.5k and finally used Waves Vocal Rider to automate levels and used Waves Renaissance de-esser on vocal track. Everything else remains the same.