25-06-2014, 03:58 AM
Nice job getting all the hook harmonies to come out 
They're a really nice blend that can easily get lost if you're not careful! One piece of constructive criticism is that when you have some of the adlib vox stick out (volume wise) more than the rest, it sounds a little out of place compared to the lead vox (with the slap back) because of how dry it is. Maybe put a tiny bit of delay on them to sit them back in the mix, that way they wont feel so "overdubbed" 
They're a really nice blend that can easily get lost if you're not careful! One piece of constructive criticism is that when you have some of the adlib vox stick out (volume wise) more than the rest, it sounds a little out of place compared to the lead vox (with the slap back) because of how dry it is. Maybe put a tiny bit of delay on them to sit them back in the mix, that way they wont feel so "overdubbed"