My attempt at this one!

[Cefe]

Hi cefe, some suggestions here also, first i think the overall mix needs more bass i hear too much mid frequencies. Also the Lead vocals have a somewhat weird fx for the style at least in my opinion, also the BG vocals are too loud and also have a strange fx. Also the electric guitars are too loud for my taste.

I hope it helps, keep it up!

Cheers,

Hola Jorge, gracias!

I know what you mean. I suppose I didnt notice all that when I first mixed it. Im in my first steps of mixing. Your comments are very much appreciated.

Cheers!