20-11-2019, 01:40 PM
(This post was last modified: 20-11-2019, 01:41 PM by [email protected].)
Hey, I think the kick is too prominent and it gets in the way of the flow of the track.
Maybe add something with the guitar and vocal part as it sounds a bit boring, maybe it's just to do with the guitar being too quiet with the vocals? Your's guitar is right volume throughout rest of song so maybe requires automation. I like the guitars during the chorus, the bass of it comes through and really adds to the voice and the panning is well executed.
The volume of the voice is pretty on point too, maybe too dry?
By all means don't take my criticism as set in stone!
Maybe add something with the guitar and vocal part as it sounds a bit boring, maybe it's just to do with the guitar being too quiet with the vocals? Your's guitar is right volume throughout rest of song so maybe requires automation. I like the guitars during the chorus, the bass of it comes through and really adds to the voice and the panning is well executed.
The volume of the voice is pretty on point too, maybe too dry?
By all means don't take my criticism as set in stone!